Dream Poem by mayank raj

Dream

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Once a thought stroke my mind,
Far away from real kind.

The valley, the flowers which I could see,
Was all very new to me.

But I kept on thinking,
It kept on expanding.

Having no ends it was going on,
Just like an unpaid loan.

Goes miles in a second
And cones back in half.
Just like it was finding something,
Which could be a six legged calf.

And everytime when it reaches the goal,
It was hindered by another soul.

Waking me up, again in the cruel world,
Leaving me alone, again in the cruel world.

I tried to make it according my need,
But failed in every attempt I seed.
So I left it and again proceed,
To the place where the path lead.

But without dreams no one can go ahead,
Can not seek the place of shade.

Only what they get, is a 'slam',
Either on feet or on their scam.

No one will hear when you scream,
Coz future is for those who dream.

Friday, November 6, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: inspirational
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mayank Raj 08 November 2015

Thanx kelly

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Kelly Kurt 06 November 2015

inspirational indeed. Thanks, Mayank

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Mayank Raj 08 November 2015

Thanx kelly

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Jazib Kamalvi 23 September 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Mayank. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Megha Roy 23 December 2015

Awe-struck, remarkable, awe-inspiring, phenomenal, overwhelming, beyond the call and as true as the poets heart =Mayank

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Megha Roy 23 December 2015

Awe-struck, Awe-Inspiring, beyond the call, remarkable, phenomenal, overwhelming and as true as the poets heart.

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Manonton Dalan 20 December 2015

everything start from a dream in some culture they said everything from the mind... just I dream about things before I write them...thanks for sharing

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Satyam Kumar Tiwari 11 November 2015

Nice one bhai.

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Mayank Raj 23 September 2018

Bhai means brother.

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Manonton Dalan 20 December 2015

I read you said Bhai is this pronounce as by, bye, buy does this means friend or something buddy with respect because this use in southern part where I leave thanks.

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