Scarlett Treat

Rookie - 22 Points (1941 / Jug Fork, Mississippi)

Dream Lover - Poem by Scarlett Treat

I spent a lifetime
Waiting...waiting
For you to arrive.
I knew you were coming...
I could feel you
In the very air I breathed.
I saw your shape
In the clouds I watched go by,
And in the ripples of water
when it rained.

You finally came...
What joy,
What bliss,
What love.

Then...
In the blink of an eye...
You were gone,
Lost to me,
As though you only existed
In my dreams.
And I remember you...
The smell of you
In the very air I breathe,
In the shape of the clouds
I watch go by,
And in the ripple of the tears
I cry.


Comments about Dream Lover by Scarlett Treat

  • Charles M Moore (6/17/2006 2:48:00 PM)


    A truly wonderful read, Exceptional poem. (Report) Reply

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  • (6/9/2006 12:58:00 PM)


    Less crying, more writing! This is so... as it should be. (Report) Reply

  • (5/26/2006 2:20:00 PM)


    This poem is wonderful. Well, so many things become only a lost dream... (Report) Reply

  • Ernestine Northover (5/23/2006 3:33:00 PM)


    Oh Scarlet, this is divine. Such a wonderful write, and such a pleasure to read. You have excelled. Love Ernestine XXX (Report) Reply

  • (5/23/2006 6:48:00 AM)


    Love the comparisions that u drew to clouds & ripples..
    yeah a love lost is hard to get through~

    Preets
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  • Nicola Burkett (5/22/2006 1:00:00 PM)


    I like the comparisons of the ripples of the rain and the ripples of your tears. This is such a sorrowful poem. Although the pain of loosing someone we ardour and love is great, it's much more painful and lonely to have never loved at all.
    Sincerely
    Nickie x x
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  • (5/17/2006 1:14:00 PM)


    This is a masterpiece, one of the most beautiful reads to date,
    Ratings high for a highly enjoyable feast of words,
    Love duncan
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  • (5/12/2006 8:13:00 AM)


    Such a beautifully sad poem Scarlett. To lose your love.....I hope to never experience. I loved your use of the ripples of water and the winds....just beautiful! Sincerely, Mary (Report) Reply

  • (5/12/2006 12:23:00 AM)


    The quality I most admire in your poetry, Scarlett, is the economy of the language.
    Yes, even this battle-scarred romantic, must merely dream of another forthcoming love to wend her way unto me. I thoroughly was caught up in the engaging piece. It really is quite beautiful.

    Greg XXO
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  • (5/11/2006 9:15:00 AM)


    The feeling of hopeful longing, longing fulfilled and that of loss is well-expressed, Scarlett... Like a dream, indeed. (Report) Reply

  • (5/11/2006 3:36:00 AM)


    Scarlett love can be sweet right up to the end, but a love that fails is like a passing dream, remember it while it was good because you will always hold on to those memories.A great poem cheers Rosiexx (Report) Reply

  • (5/10/2006 5:38:00 PM)


    Better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all, springs to mind Scarlett. A loving write. Tai (Report) Reply

  • (5/10/2006 5:21:00 PM)


    So poignant, Scarlett. How hard it is to accept a loss like that.
    Hugs
    Anna xxx
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 10, 2006



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