Subbaraman N V

Freshman - 864 Points (31st July 1941 / Karaikkudi - Tamilnadu- India)

Dream While You'Re Awake!

Poem by Subbaraman N V

Dream while you're awake
To build the world you want to make
Help plan the steps you need to take
First few to taste the success cake!

Build the castles in the air
Ambition level kept in the golden chair
Castles of excellence well taken care
Ultimate results one can not compare!

Dreaming while awake
Building castles in the air
Are but initial steps in its wake
To be fine tuned to the needs with care!

Steps to follow surely needs
Will and wit, vision and mission
Power and strength - delightful deeds
Bound to take your dream to fruition!


Comments about Dream While You'Re Awake! by Subbaraman N V

  • Gita AshokGita Ashok (6/28/2010 3:02:00 AM)

    The words here flow so beautifully as in a melodious song.

    Dreaming while awake
    Building castles in the air
    Are but initial steps in its wake
    To be fine tuned to the needs with care!

    The way the first two stanzas have been weaved together here in the above four lines is remarkable. The last stanza is filled to the brim with worldly wisdom. A great composition, indeed!(Report)Reply

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  • Mary Das (11/27/2007 11:45:00 PM)

    Very well written. Yes, we all can relate to this. Thank you for sharing.(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 13, 2007

Poem Edited: Monday, April 25, 2011