A Bright Tomorrow Poem by Subbaraman N V

A Bright Tomorrow

Rating: 3.1


Amidst
Today's
And till this day's
Pain and pangs
Sufferings and sorrows
Falls and failures
Poverty and penury
I do see a
Silver lining
Bright tomorrow
Absolutely bright
Based purely on
Efforts and efficacy
Of hopes and prayer!
Tomorrow
A bright and prosperous tomorrow
Seen through my inward eyes
And its melodies
Heard through my inward ears!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 28 November 2008

The legacy of tomorrow will be forever brighter.........as tomorrows! ! Good job Matchaa!

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Chitra - 29 November 2008

a bright tomorrow is what I now see and hear through your gleaming words 10+

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Vaibhav Pandey 08 December 2008

I hope the tomorrow is bright for everyone. loved your poem give you 10 for this.

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Vidi Writes 10 January 2009

The Hope of Tomorow Is the hope of Life. Past Lost Present doldrums Tomorow, the Future which holds. In the strength of that Hold All desires unfold And warms up from Todays Cold. Wonderful Subject... Thank you dear poet For this delight.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 07 April 2009

yes bright tomorrow is the future of the world........the kingdom of heaven on earth itself..............

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Sathyanarayana M V S 11 June 2015

When inner eyes opens there is no darkness or gloom of thought...from this very moment everything looks positive. Well rendered Sir.

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Saadat Tahir 09 July 2010

a very nice balanced and easy write well done, cheers

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Gita Ashok 08 June 2010

Bright tomorrow Absolutely bright Based purely on Efforts and efficacy Of hopes and prayer! Tomorrow A bright and prosperous tomorrow Seen through my inward eyes And its melodies Heard through my inward ears! What a strong dose of optimism here! Here's wishing you a great today and: 'A bright and prosperous tomorrow'

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Kannan G 05 March 2010

A very optimistic composition! Warm regards and best wishes.

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Surya . 05 July 2009

a real blessings from a great poet.let it come true as given in this para. 'A bright and prosperous tomorrow Seen through my inward eyes And its melodies Heard through my inward ears! ' pl read my a day worth waiting for voted10 surya

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Karaikkudi - Tamilnadu- India
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