Dreams can be as wonder full as your first kiss
Dreams can be great as the first score in a game
what i love about dreams is they can determine your fate
or know exactly what's bothering u
but what i like most of all is the stuff u can do
in dreams you can dance on the biggest stage
in dreams you can fly over the highest mountain
or even meet that perfect guy that sweeps you off your feet and never says goodbye
in the words of areosmith dream on.
it's a simple abd basic poem but it states your opinions and screams TRUTH as you read. and i liked the comparisons. good job! ! !
I think i have to agree with Robbie Squires it is simple i like it.
i loved this one. its just so simple but at the same time really awesome. plus ur aerosmith reference was cool too ;) . i also liked it because it was one of the few poems on here that actually made sense and i could relate to. awesome job.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
So eccentric! i read it atleast twice befor fully understanding it! its lovely!