Dreams Of Blood Stained Mind Part 1 Poem by Eric Elliott

Dreams Of Blood Stained Mind Part 1

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Bleeding eyes
shredded heart
a crimson smile
comes across his face
My life his gun erased
falling down
to the ground
I hear a strange
Blurring sound
Use the last of my strength
To look for your fingers
Painted solid pink
I open my right eye
And only see that one guy
But I saw you Sitting
Yelling with a shriek
Things go black
Always thought
I’d die from a heart attack
But it’s too late I have now met my fate
I only wanted to hold you tight
And keep you warm in the night
Sweat runs down my face
Blood is all I taste…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 14 June 2009

Its extremely dark, your blacked-out.What the heck! It happens when your caught in a love triangle.Excellent works Eric! !

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