Sunday, May 6, 2018

Drowning Comments

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Johnson Ongeri 07 May 2018

Beautiful expression of emotion.

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Johnson Ongeri 07 May 2018

So I isolate myself from the ones I love. Because maybe in the silence of pain I can find the answer as to why my eyes are not good enough to stare into an infinitely beautiful sky. But then there's times where I start to think that maybe I'm not meant to walk on the surface to see the sky. That maybe I need to learn how to breathe underwater. I love this part beautiful expression of emotion

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Johnson Ongeri 07 May 2018

Beautiful expression of emotion

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Johnson Ongeri 07 May 2018

So I isolate myself from the ones I love. Because maybe in the silence of pain I can find the answer as to why my eyes are not good enough to stare into an infinitely beautiful sky. But then there's times where I start to think that maybe I'm not meant to walk on the surface to see the sky. That maybe I need to learn how to breathe underwater. I love this part beautiful poem

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Taylor Paige 07 May 2018

Thank you!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 May 2018

Dear Taylor, such a well crafted poem👍👍👍

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Taylor Paige 07 May 2018

Thank you so much!

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