Drowning Poem by Akinyi Oyuke

Drowning

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Evening,
The shades are already visible,
The clouds gathering,
A storm,
Just as my heart,
A thousand voices in my head,
None giving direction,
Sure life is cruel,
But why spill its wrath on me
Its just a month over and so
Only angels predict happenings
Prophets if there exist any
Foretellers but only lived in oldage
I look at my life and God I question
Cant it be a little simpler?
A question I ask
Born without a golden spoon
Cant I be considered?
My hearts weighing heavy on me
My dreams I watch being walked upon
The goverment juggling with a future am working so hard on.
And a force so strong pulling me
Backwards...
To a place so dry
A place so lone
The sky looks dry
The air seems retired
The future so bleak
No hope..
Am Crushed

Monday, September 10, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Okoyo 09 January 2023

Beautiful work ❤️

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Akinyi Oyuke 06 March 2023

Thanks love

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Susan Williams 23 November 2018

a force so strong pulling me Backwards..- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -very effective use of structure here! ! !

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Akinyi Oyuke 13 February 2020

Thank you.

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Rodolfo 15 September 2018

I dig it for real, man. Good job

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Akinyi Oyuke 13 February 2020

Hello Rodolfo, thank you. As you know we all try to do what we can and when one appreciates it..we appreciate right back.

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