Drowning Breathlessly Poem by Kaitlin Schmidt
Drowning Breathlessly
Drowning breathlessly never ending
Pounding vacancies with no guarantee
A gentle fatality has sweet design
Innocently separating with only a graceful tear
Emptiness of space everything amounts
Power obediently deceiving
Solemnness misunderstands
But perfection is the only confession
Dependency of a painful measure
Bears viciously underneath
Pretending warms the transparent influence
Growing slow inward searching
Willingly connect a safe sparkle
Rising as loving
Overdraw the normal guard
Majestically overturned again unseen
Emptiness of space everything amounts Power obediently deceiving Solemnness misunderstands But perfection is the only confession what a saying! perfection is the only confession. no body is perfect but we should try for more perfection, striving towards perfection should be our, every ones motto..a very nice poem, i like it.
The poet grows and matures in her own êrsonal search for wisdom and compliance in this world of separations, egoism and and wants. There is nevetheless an aspiration for something breath - able and true.... Love a lot the way the words are selected and used...excellent metaphors....Keep-it and keep writing! +++++
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4/22/2024 12:25:06 PM # 1.0.0.1119
rich in meaning inside tempting to read again and again..........a good write.9