Drunk Words Poem by Evi Koroni

Drunk Words

Rating: 5.0


I'm bawl for love but,
love is not here.
I'm bawl for you and me but,
only my shadow is to hear me.
I'm writing for you by the shadow
which follows me.
A pen, a paper and my love.
Love for you.
Brain; full of smoke.
Body; full of alcohol.
a Blues; is my only company.
Words in my brain are running tonight
playing an insidious game.
I remember -you.
I remember -the past.
I remember -my love for you
more and more.
Yes.
More and more
More and more
I'm bawl for love but,
love is not here.
I'm bawl for you and me.
This night looks as a blues song.
Love.
I said... Love.
Feel me. Again.
Feel it.
Can you feel me?
You have gone
like tulips are dying in winter.
Are you traveling in secret sea?
Are you flying through moonlight?
I'm bawl for love but,
love is not here.
Drunk words.
Drunk mind.
Drunk feelings.

Thursday, November 30, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: blues,dead,drinking,feelings,love,love and friendship,missing,night,passing,wildlife
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maira Eliz 01 December 2017

OMG This is really....... deep

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Mary Skarpathiotaki 01 December 2017

bravo EVI continues......10+

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Theo Pappas 01 December 2017

Such an interesting write, Evi.... a big 10????

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 January 2020

Love. I said... Love. Feel me. Again. Feel it. Can you feel me? .. tulips are dying... secret sea, flying through the moonlight. wonderful.. tony

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 15 May 2018

Absolutely emotional poem by an emotional writer...Thanks for sharing with us

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Jeffrey West 03 December 2017

You are rock! I like your style its refreshing and sweet. A beautiful poem, incredibly sad and dripping with emotion. Great writing. Thanks for sharing another poem with us.

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Fog Runner 02 December 2017

Flaming-hot desire met with hard, cold reality; your emotional and physical discomfort must somehow be solved very fast. I think readers will marvel at how 'real' your plight seems to them.

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Ariel Loiret 02 December 2017

it's is a blues - rock poem. I like it so much. It's very emotional and full of passion. Love your pen and your passion dear poetess. I hope to read more poems by you. Ariel

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