Stop talking, leave me alone.
Keep the silence, let me catch the sun.
I'm staring at her. A smile, that smile.
A strong reason to live.
She is the day, the noon, the sunset, the midnight.
Oh god, she looks so frail
I'm afraid to touch her.
Questions are torturing my mind today
and keep me awake all the night.
How is her kiss?
How is her gait?
How is her breathing when she is sleeping?
In the evening does she cuddle her pillow; or not;
Does she laugh when she is asleep; or not;
Stop talking, none is talking to me now
Keep the silence, let me dream that sun.
I adore this line Keep the silence, let me catch the sun. So many meanings, so many feelings. I particularly like the parrallel first two and last two lines. Great
a poem of loving feeling's that for now are being kept quiet? .................well penned Evi
love for beloved / lover oneday will take near love for humanity, creatures, ...... i believe, fantasfic love poem, congrats and thanks for sharing the poem with us
Nice poem reflecting the passion as well as the quest and resolve of a lover to achieve a goal which, at first sight, looks impossible. There is a whiff of fresh air in the expression. Thanks.
good poem but if only the selectors had edited it a bit it would havebeen more delicious then eating the hot sun in silence
I watch her. A smile, that's smile A strong reason to live. This is the day, the noon, the sunset, the midnight. Oh god, she looks so frail I'm afraid to touch her. Questions are torturing my mind today and keep me awake all the night.- - - - - -The question tortures me- - - -The sun, the life force , also goes through blues- -Does she embrace her pillow to get solace? Congratulations for Poem of the Day.
Beautiful it is to feel that sun in a peaceful environment forgetting our woes just dreaming. Thank you
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I love to read your poems. They are very emotional, so real