A Blues For Her Poem by Evi Koroni

A Blues For Her

Rating: 5.0


Stop talking, leave me alone.
Keep the silence, let me catch the sun.
I'm staring at her. A smile, that smile.
A strong reason to live.
She is the day, the noon, the sunset, the midnight.
Oh god, she looks so frail
I'm afraid to touch her.
Questions are torturing my mind today
and keep me awake all the night.
How is her kiss?
How is her gait?
How is her breathing when she is sleeping?
In the evening does she cuddle her pillow; or not;
Does she laugh when she is asleep; or not;
Stop talking, none is talking to me now
Keep the silence, let me dream that sun.

NOTES:
December 8,2017
by Evi Koroni

Friday, December 8, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,feelings,her,love,passion,romance,romantic
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ariel Loiret 08 December 2017

I love to read your poems. They are very emotional, so real

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Jeffrey West 09 December 2017

I like it. Nice poem.10++++ Very emotional

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Katie Holten 10 December 2017

I adore this line Keep the silence, let me catch the sun. So many meanings, so many feelings. I particularly like the parrallel first two and last two lines. Great

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Tom Allport 15 May 2018

a poem of loving feeling's that for now are being kept quiet? .................well penned Evi

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Muzahidul Reza 15 May 2018

love for beloved / lover oneday will take near love for humanity, creatures, ...... i believe, fantasfic love poem, congrats and thanks for sharing the poem with us

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Rajnish Manga 19 May 2018

Nice poem reflecting the passion as well as the quest and resolve of a lover to achieve a goal which, at first sight, looks impossible. There is a whiff of fresh air in the expression. Thanks.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 15 May 2018

good poem but if only the selectors had edited it a bit it would havebeen more delicious then eating the hot sun in silence

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Bharati Nayak 15 May 2018

I watch her. A smile, that's smile A strong reason to live. This is the day, the noon, the sunset, the midnight. Oh god, she looks so frail I'm afraid to touch her. Questions are torturing my mind today and keep me awake all the night.- - - - - -The question tortures me- - - -The sun, the life force , also goes through blues- -Does she embrace her pillow to get solace? Congratulations for Poem of the Day.

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Lyn Paul 15 May 2018

Beautiful it is to feel that sun in a peaceful environment forgetting our woes just dreaming. Thank you

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 15 May 2018

Let me catch the sun! That's a bold line....10+

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