Udaya R. Tennakoon

Each Other - Poem by Udaya R. Tennakoon

Laid things
Here and there
Unedited reality
Seems to be natural

Broke the reality
And beauty of the disorder

Neatly and nicely arranged
Shingly and hardly cleaned
Structure less structure is structured
Everything calm and quite

Guests came with smiles
Gestures having edited
Both beginning to act
Prepared arena for that

Plays with choked and forged words
Jumps with high level tone
Goes flattering oneself
Ends with unaccepted misled signs

Created order with unmatched look
Uneasy tiredness was after that
Disorder slightly creeps from hidden
Naturalist living comes with shade in

Comments about Each Other by Udaya R. Tennakoon

  • (9/20/2012 4:26:00 PM)

    Well done..churn on... (Report) Reply

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  • Erika Wingo (9/20/2012 10:08:00 AM)

    I truly understand what you are saying. Not only are your poems wonderful but one can lose themselves in the mystique. (Report) Reply

  • Alufa Oke Joshua (9/14/2012 12:56:00 AM)

    nice write-up and keep it up. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 13, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, September 14, 2012

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