Earth, The Redolent Comments

Now this sounds like snatches from National Geographic/Discovery..and deft handiwork of the imagination...The poetess at work now! ! Good write. Cheers. Subroto

A profound and deep poem finding its unitive thread in a simele question. Well written.

kavita, you are very talented; you have that thing in you; I love your stuff

Excellent composition! a provocative one..genuine questions embedded. I liked it.10

your poem poses a number of salient questions, Kavitha...the blood remains one and the same in every one alike...perhaps the analogy could be in that you contain everything fragrant in you as the redolent earth...good write...10

Kavitha, Wow! ! ! A provokative poem. If it is all day, you don't feel fit, By fatigue and unrest you r hit; Night serves as Nature's balm, It makes you feel fresh and calm. Sans darkkness light can't be known, It is half plus half that makes One.

Fine eloquence! observation praiseworthy! Thoughtful. 10+++