This spirit roams the vacant corridors,
searching for something that’s uppermost,
in his mind.
Disturbing the air, causing a chilly
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This poem makes one feel sad at the possibility of remaining here after death, roaming and searching, never finding what is needed. One can only hope that one day he finds his peace and can follow the path to the light. Again I must say Ernestine the imagry is fantastic. Excellent work as usual Melvina
Great imagery here Ernestine, poor earthbound soul, let's hope he finds his way home, lovely write, Lynda xxx
A captivating write Ernestine! ! Great imagery, thanks for sharing! ! *10*! ! Best wishes , Friend Thad
Lets hope that he makes it through, each have their bag to carry, some carry it easier than others that's all Love duncan X
I believe in the supernatural and I've seen a few ghosts in my time. I know that spirits are sometimes grounded, unable to move on to the next world and are invariably sad. Usually as a result of an injustice and wanting to communicate with the living in order that the truth be known. This is a such a great poem. Andrew x