Eden Poem by Brook Renwick

Eden

Rating: 5.0


The flowering fields,
at the mountains haunch,
provided sanctuary,
and respite.

Ardent.
Two souls natural,
on a spring morning.
consumed fruits.

Wednesday, January 26, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: eden
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 27 January 2022

beautiful words to describe the first book of the Bible Bravo!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 January 2022

A lovely poem with compelling images. Well crafted and expressed

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Unnikrishnan E S 26 January 2022

Loved this beautiful poem. Love is such that it finds its "flowering fields" all by itself, be it on the mountain top or the vast ocean top. Top score.

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Brook Renwick

Brook Renwick

Sydney, Australia
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