Efforts On Critical Moment! Poem by Ramesh T A

Efforts On Critical Moment!

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After hard efforts all day, when success smiles
How happy our hearts will be, imagine yourself!
At the critical moment, that too at an odd hour, if
We have to admit one in hospital, how would it be?

No idea will occur in mind as to how we have to do;
We take some efforts what could be possible; that too
All in a hurry with available conveyance possible....;
Fortunately, if all goes well, our efforts pay dividend!

Such a situation we have faced with all efforts possible;
We have succeeded in our efforts to do the best we can;
All have come to a good and happy ending as in a story;
Our prayers gave us faith and we proceeded well sure!

When we are uncertain, we pray and take all efforts
And carry out all things in a hurry and if all goes well,
We are sure to meet with victory at the end, but tension,
And hurry and bustle surely puts anyone in a soup long!

Friday, August 21, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: moment
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2015

......... nice thought in poem.. success makes us all to smile....10 It is natural for us to take it as casual with all blessings hat is how we prove as human being

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Ramesh T A 21 August 2015

Thanks for your appreciation and a quotation to support your comment, my friend!

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David Wood 21 August 2015

Fate takes us to where it want's to go, we have to be prepared to be led.

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Ramesh T A 21 August 2015

I agree with your view, dear David Wood! Yes, indeed we are led by fate or we are going by the route opened by God!

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Ramesh T A

Ramesh T A

Madurai, Tamil Nadu, India
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