! Electric Haiku Poem by Michael Shepherd

! Electric Haiku

Rating: 3.2


First brown leaves falling,
crisp air now the sun's set,
another light bulb gone.

They last for years,
go as the leaves fall;
perhaps they too feel old.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 23 August 2007

Now why does this one remind me of Jerry? 'Bloody globes! Always dying at the wrong moment. They do it deliberately! ' love, Allie xxxx

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Ernestine Northover 23 August 2007

Everything has a set lifespan, and temperatures can indeed react and make the bulbs go 'bang'. I suppose it like 'duracell' batteries, some bulbs last longer than others. Great haikus. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Scarlett Treat 23 August 2007

Sitting in the dark... Seeing inside of eyelids... Very strange indeed!

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Michael Shepherd

Michael Shepherd

Marton, Lancashire
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