! Metaphor Poem by Michael Shepherd
! Metaphor
A pretty girl
is like a simile
and vice-a-versa
so I'd say
for like the sunlight it
delights our so prosaic day
and life is better for
a metaphor
when apposite
to what you write
the first I used
that made some sense
came out of childish
innocence
before I read
the word in prose
I thought that what
just goes and goes
was 'dire rear' -
not too bad
as an idea
for a nappy-happy lad?
I like the way you start this poem, A pretty girl is like a simile/ and vice-a-versa...
oh yes, for our US readers - 'for a pampered lad'... (did you know it is the most common international word?)
I think I like this poem, Michael. I definitely like the first part. Then I got a little lost, but I liked the imagery and flow anyway.
He's got one of the best poems I read... wonder why he is still a rookie?
'dire rear' feels like the bottom is falling out of your world; o) . Loved this little poem, very clever and funny, a pleasure to read.
really funny and interesting poem, i love it honestly _ please take time to read my poem 'Let's Grow up together'
well done great piece of work, thank you for sharing this amazing feeling +++++10
Is it a poem? Seems like a.collection of phrases picked from the air and typed into collective column.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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10/14/2024 1:54:51 AM # 1.0.0
Nice little piece of music, Michael.