Eleven, Eleven Poem by Angel A. Lockwood

Eleven, Eleven



Its my mother's birthday
Although she's no longer here
I celebrate her life with gladness
Sometimes shedding a few tears
Mom, I really miss you
I pray that you can hear
All those who still love you
And sometimes feels near
Happy birthday Mommie
You were always a beautiful queen
May your memory live on
For you are Christ 's redeemed

Sunday, November 10, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 11 November 2019

i assume Nov.11 is Mom's birthday. Happy Birthday, TODAY! first line: It's (a common enough error) aka " it is" i'd use " feel near" , not " feels" i like this poem. bri :)

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Chima Ononogbu 10 November 2019

Happy birthday to her, and may her soul continue to rest in peace. Nice poem. I also lost my mom roughly 9 years ago. I could relate to your feelings.

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