Emotions Poem by Amber McCalment

Emotions

Rating: 4.8


He takes a deep breath.
as i sit there waiting
the truth unspoken,
our emotions degrading.
hungry for words
but nothing being said
scared to look up
to the truth ahead.
tears streaming down
warm and salty
heartbeat racing
i can the horrific sound.

and suddenly, he looks up.
his face distraught, burning with pain.
fingers trembling and eyes so swollen.
he puts his hands on my arm, and i cry again.
he stand up to leave the room,
then stops to look at me,
he says, 'i'm sorry.'

and then he leaves.

Tuesday, May 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: heartbreak
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is about how i went through my last breakup and what i felt. this explains my emotions to a T and how my ex other half felt afterwards after cheating on me.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 20 May 2015

Distress and disappointment in bliss of love well depicted in the poem. A lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. ➕9

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Kelly Kurt 20 May 2015

You said a lot without getting into the details. Nicely done, Amber

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Amber Mccalment 20 May 2015

thank you so much [3

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Ayman Parray 20 May 2015

Full of emotions, would like to read more of your poems. Thanks for sharing Amber

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Amber Mccalment 20 May 2015

thanks, ill work on some more....ive been writing poetry and music since i was nine years old. i love doing this. :)

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