Emotions: Jealousy - 01 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Emotions: Jealousy - 01

Rating: 4.9


Jealousy is the rain like

A Childish, Obstinate, playful and craving girl

In the first week of her puberty.

Thursday, September 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: jealousy,emotions,first love,flow,girl,rain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 September 2017

GOOD POETRY iF YOU WANT COMMENTS READ OTHERS NOW ME I SEE MOST OF YOU DON'T READ OTHERS NOR COMMENT WHY have u on friends list say good puberty urs this one

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 14 September 2017

Thanks for the gracious remarks and the sweet complain. I am sorry to have neglected my friend. Regards. Subhas

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 September 2017

please read my best poem MOMS SMILES and so many others thanks poet

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 14 September 2017

Thank you sir for your kind remarks. Tonight I would comment on it, just after 2 hours.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 15 September 2017

ealousy is the rain like A Childish, Obstinate, playful and craving girl In the first week of her puberty. Wow, what a wonderful write. A comparison between first puberty that disturbs a tiny girl and disobedient rain and jealousy both of which make the mind unsettled. Thanks poet for this marvel of art. 10++++++

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Prativa Rani 20 April 2018

A comparison between first puberty that disturbs a tiny girl and disobedient rain and jealousy both of which make the mind unsettled. Thanks poet for this marvel of art. 10++++++

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Prativa Rani 20 April 2018

A comparison between first puberty that disturbs a tiny girl and disobedient rain and jealousy both of which make the mind unsettled. Thanks poet for this marvel of art.

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D Priyanka Singh 29 October 2017

Jealousy is the rain like A Childish, Obstinate, playful and craving girl In the first week of her puberty. A nice haiku describing the emotion jealousy. 10 for it.

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Anita Aparajita Das 25 September 2017

Jealousy is the rain like A Childish, Obstinate, playful and craving girl In the first week of her puberty. Wow a poem comparing puberty with the emotion jealousy and the first rains. Thanks for the lovely poem. 10+++

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Sanjukta Sahoo 25 September 2017

Jealousy is the rain like A Childish, Obstinate, playful and craving girl In the first week of her puberty. What a beautiful comparison with a girl's life. Loved it. 10++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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