Emptiness Poem by Trisha Sengupta

Emptiness

Rating: 4.8


You are there, when my eyes are closed,
You exist in each of my heart beat
You are the only meaning of my life,
For you I'm ready to smile even on my defeat.

But you get lost when I open my eyes,
Tears flow like water from melting ice.
Searched for you in every corner,
Called your name several times...
But no voice responded- - just as before,
I could only hear the tinkling of wind chimes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I loved this Emptiness...just as i expected it to be. Beautiful.

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Litan Dey 24 August 2013

For you I'm ready to smile even on my defeat.....Good said.Gd n8

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Khairul Ahsan 26 August 2014

Feelings of void well expressed. When love becomes a one way traffic, such feelings overwhelm the yearning mind of the seeking, searching soul. I have a similar poem titled 'Life, A Void Circle'. You may like to read it and say a few words.

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Utsav Patel 01 September 2013

Let it go is the best way to welcome something better and new...

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Zero Empty 28 August 2013

nice imagery in this read

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Dr.subhendu Kar 27 August 2013

For you I'm ready to smile even on my defeat.................. heart rejoices by symphony onshore yet quest ruffles being bereft of sheen, quite passionate write,10+, keep on writing with more metaphors and imagery

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Marcus Mckinley 27 August 2013

you have captured the emotion of emptiness very well. nicely done

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