! ! ! Emptiness The Heart! ! ! Poem by Dwi utami

! ! ! Emptiness The Heart! ! !

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The moon bathed me with the light illuminated this heart.
Show to him that my love was parallel like the river water.
How so that he knew..

That i'walked on wastelands brought the love and the tear.
I'brought my love was as soft as the cloud to him.

I'will give the long breath in living him.
I'hoped he knew my feeling.

When the love did not repay.
My heart embraced the holloWness.
Our love was still without repaid.

The long breath in my life was to love you with all my heart.
Would you stay quiet?
Had you felt what i'feeling?

How made you cry and understand my crying?
Oh..love this the heart was empty.
I'did not want to increase pain with the tears.

I'waited and waiting.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 11 February 2016

When the love did not repay! Nice piece of work.

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Jhay Lito Sanchez Sanchez 13 September 2012

beautiful lines...love this...i love you jayson

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Kevin Carney 28 September 2010

The long breath in my life was to love you with all my heart. Would you stay quiet? Had you felt what i'feeling? These are great lines, we have all felt this way at one point. Very nice write and please keep writing.

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