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My Feel

Rating: 3.2
I'wanted Knew How You?
I'wanted Knew about You
I'wanted Knew How Your Life Without me.
I'm Missing The moment Before our Together.
I'm Missing The moment our Mutualy of Embrance.
I'm Missing The moment our Mutualy of Care.
Why did You disappear?
Why did You QUITE?
And why did You to Close the Eyes For me?
Did You Know? My tears wetted my heart.

Did You know? My heart cried to loud.
Did You know? How My feeling
I'know You Never will be come again to Me.
You were been disappearing from My heart.
And Now MY heart was empty.
My heart missing Your embrance.
My heart missing Your touch.
My heart missing Your kisses.
Please my love.
Come back soon and constant to stay always deep my heart.
Dwi utami
Friday, July 9, 2010
Saadat Tahir 16 July 2010
i wd call it as strong as the fishermans net...and with its tug too some very touching lines.... keep coming in cascades of emotive lines the english may be a foreigners lingo...but the thrust and lilt is unmistakable beautiful id say cheers
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Subhajit Biswas 16 July 2010
Nather poem whitch touch my. Heart. Great great, again tanks....
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Claudia Krizay 15 July 2010
very powerful write, Dwi Dwi- I can almost feel the emotions you so honestly express in this poem. I love it! Claudia
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‘Come back soon and constant to stay always deep my heart.’ Poetry of exaltation…sure I’m she will be back and see the car she is sitting and waving hand at you to get your hands … Thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
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A yearning, longing heart! Keep writing, , , Love D
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My heart missing Your kisses. Please my love. Come back soon and constant to stay always deep my heart., , nice poem in first attempt.. i enjoyed reading through out....10 read mine..A rush to find
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Indira Renganathan 11 July 2010
Very suitable title....good theme...good thinking...improve on more writing...congrats... and thanks for your comment on my poem
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some beautiful lines and thoughts keep writing develop your insight and potential
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Chulsoo Kim 10 July 2010
Keeping yourself in love is brilliant way of love.
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