Aqua Flower (The Princess is)


End Is Beginning - Poem by Aqua Flower (The Princess is)

I cannot feel anymore
My body is numb
no feeling or emotions
I cannot overcome
I cannot feel anymore
the hurt is so bad
I was better feeling the happy with the sad
now I just feel mad
And my anger makes it worse
My days filled with emptiness
and all I can do is curse
at all the bitter unhappiness
I cannot feel anymore
Is there any more hope left in me?
For I have given up on finding the right key
I cannot feel anymore
I live in a body now that is a robot
clutched in the devils claw
My beating heart will stop
I cannot feel anymore
the end will come
when there is nothing to live for
my life will be done

Copyright © Aqua Flower (The Princess is)

Topic(s) of this poem: sadness


Comments about End Is Beginning by Aqua Flower (The Princess is)

  • (8/12/2017 1:48:00 PM)


    When you wrote this, your soul's pilot light was a low flicker.
    Now, I am certain, it burns bright.
    Pure- -and despite all the numbness- -painful poetry,
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    Aqua Flower Aqua Flower (8/12/2017 3:14:00 PM)

    Yes dear poet....it was definitely a dark time in my life. I had to make decisions. I couldn't go one feeling the way I did! My light is bright! I am able to see now what I want and what is good for me. Thank you for reading and commenting.

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  • Dustin Dawin (8/1/2017 12:08:00 AM)


    No feeling or emotions when love is numb sadness fills the void oh to refresh the page...great enjoyed. (Report) Reply

    Aqua Flower Aqua Flower (8/1/2017 5:03:00 AM)

    Thanks for commenting. Life does that sometimes but then we press refresh! Turn a new page and start fresh!

  • Rajnish Manga (4/29/2017 10:35:00 PM)


    The poem creates a very sad and poignant atmosphere which is further accentuated by the emotional narrative. Very focused and impressive presentation. Thanks a lot, Dear Poet.
    My body is numb / no feeling or emotions / the hurt is so bad
    Is there any more hope left in me?
    when there is nothing to live for / my life will be done
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  • Lucas Cousin Tuka (2/15/2017 6:19:00 AM)

    Sie sind wirklich eine Prinzessin
    Dear Princess i admire your write up so much, and i believe you are writing out of life experience.
    life itself is a school of taught, where people learn new things each and everyday.
    love itself needs wisdom inorder for both couples to know do and the dont love.
    in life wisdom is the principle thing, without wisdom the love between two lovers or couples cannot be consolidated, i love you and i like you write up, okay
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  • (1/3/2017 9:51:00 AM)


    feeling nothing but sadness. sadness can't be nothing, and also when one is searching for right key. poem is very nice (Report) Reply

  • (1/17/2016 10:44:00 AM)


    The power of emotion in this poem is great. Strong structure of sentiments and the reality of reality. (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (11/8/2015 8:50:00 AM)


    Such a nice poem on sadness and satisfaction, a beautiful description of human feelings, we all sometimes think like this but let me tell you a story. A king asked his favorite slave, I want a sentence or a phrase for my ring, that can make me sad when I am happy, again that can make me happy when I am sad. The slave gave him a sentence, This time will also pass! Although your poem is a nice description of human sadness and frustration written in a lovely style but I tell you the same thing, time is never loyal to anyone, it will hunt someone else and spare you. (Report) Reply

    Aqua Flower Aqua Flower (2/21/2016 6:53:00 PM)

    Thank you Akhtar for this very wise and inspirational story. I shall keep this message in my thoughts and always remember it. :)

  • Alice Perfect (3/9/2015 11:58:00 PM)


    the good news is that you are feeling lots!
    If not
    the body would be dead

    who adds the meaning to feeling?
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    Aqua Flower Aqua Flower (3/14/2015 2:29:00 PM)

    the lion!

  • Lyn Paul (3/9/2015 5:07:00 PM)


    Life is so full of ups and down. We fall down and we HAVE to get up again. Music and the beach soothe my soul and PH. May you find your path to happiness. Enjoyed your words. Thank You (Report) Reply

    Aqua Flower Aqua Flower (3/14/2015 2:30:00 PM)

    thank you....only one way to go!

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 7, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, December 30, 2016


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