End Of Day Poem by Barry Middleton

End Of Day

Rating: 4.7


horizontal rays of light
illuminate the stolid trees
swaying in a gentle breeze

a setting sun speaks of fate
and I can see the dark to come
for you and me and everyone

a breeze declares the hour late
prayer or hope cannot defeat
the end of day and self deceit

the harbinger of heavy night
impassive to my futile pleas
cannot bring me to my knees

but I will bow as if contrite
imagination to appease
and justify its cruel decrees

then I accept the final hour
as I accept my final plight
and softly step into the night

End Of Day
Friday, August 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: death,fate,sunset
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 27 August 2016

The last stanza is like icing on the cake. Written with deep feelings. An acceptance of fate, of darkness graciously.10

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Barry Middleton 27 August 2016

Thank you Nosheen. I can think of nothing else to do with fate but accept it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 August 2016

Setting sun definitely says about fate and we see darkness comes inside. Life process comes towards end and we face death. Horizontal rays of light we expect to get next in arrival of birth. Accepting final hour is wise motive because there is hidden truth of new life. Amazing this poem is and philosophical definitely...10

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Barry Middleton 27 August 2016

Thank you. The comment and rating are appreciated.

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