Endless Waiting Poem by shakil ahmed

Endless Waiting

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Endless Waiting

I opened all the doors
Of my little world
To welcome her
In a befitting manner.
The sky was blue and bright
Birds were twittering
At the edge of pine wood
For the last time of the year.
I always thought
She would come
At the appointed time.
I waited endlessly,
The time arrived
But she didn’t.

We were tied
With an unseen rope
She loosened the knot
In a strange way.
I could understand
She was leaving
My world’s boundary
For ever and ever.

Still I open
All my doors
And wait endlessly.
I know she will not come
But I perceive that
Death is approaching
Slowly and slowly
And entering into my world

Let death come,
Surely death will consume
All my agony and pain.

Monday, October 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 24 October 2015

Imagery depicts your loss and it's pain Shakil. Your feelings are very well expressed and understandable. Thank you for sharing them. RoseAnn

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Sanjukta Nag 19 October 2015

The pain of a lover's heart is well expressed. nice write.

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shakil ahmed

shakil ahmed

Badarpur, Assam, India.
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