Fear Of Death Poem by shakil ahmed
Fear Of Death
Fear of Death
I am confined in the cauldron of smoke
Coming out of perpetual inferno
That is blazing with fury and angst.
The ugly inferno gapes at me
With violent rage to swallow my soul.
No way to escape from its rigid clasp
Guilt’s ugly face has chilled my footsteps
I am destined to face God’s wrath
No body will bemoan for my melancholic death.
I hear, death knocks at my door,
But I am not ready to face
That mighty and inevitable power
I know, I have to take this path
And will be swept away leaf like in the flow
None can rebuff its irrevocable command
Even if you are not ready for eternal journey.
My thoughts of death floats like string of kite
In the vast and infinite blue sky
I am a confirm sinner, and
God’s mercy is my only hope of redemption.
Shakil Ahmed.
My thoughts of death floats like string of kite In the vast and infinite blue sky I am a confirm sinner, and God’s mercy is my only hope of redemption. An excellent poem, Shakil, I like it so much. Thanks a lot for sharing....
The idea itself is scary, let alone its fruition. Thanks, Shakil
A very well written poem on angst, despair, and the mortality of human beings with the hope for salvation through faith in God.. I loved your use of imagery and subtle references to Dante.. Thanks for sharing :)
The image of death is depicted astoundingly with wisely chosen words. Great write!
I am a confirm sinner, and God’s mercy is my only hope of redemption. Wonderful write and deep faith and emotions
I am confirm sinner and God 's mercy is only hope of redemption Nicely crafted poem. I loved. Please read and comment on my poem dear frog.
Brilliant write with inspired lines and amazing depth of emotions unleashed in a triumph of mastery of words!
This is simply amazing. Death is a chilling thought. There's no escape from it. You have put the feelings of every mortal being with regard to death here. This poem strikes a chord with everyone. Well-worded and well-crafted.
Well penned the eternal truth...There is no escape from the doom ordained.. Thanks for sharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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The poem brings to fore the common notions and fears attached to the inevitability of death. Very well written. Thanks. I quote: No body will bemoan for my melancholic death / I am a confirm sinner, and / God’s mercy is my only hope of redemption.