Monday, April 28, 2014

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A long drive up north, on my own
I stopped by at a country town,
To answer nature’s call
Feeling urgent, I didn’t stall
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Paul Sebastian
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Anand Brown 30 April 2014

Comical, I couldn't help but giggle when I can across this poem. I love poets who respect rhyme schemes (patterns) , as a student of Literature I have been drilled to look at that as soon as I engage with a poem (Modern day brainwashing, lol.) Rhyme schemes are overlooked today as free verse takes priority over structure. Let me be the first one to appreciate your effort in constructing this poem with respect to rhyming patterns. Here is the pattern I picked up: aa, bb, cc, dd, e: ab, ab, d, a, d. Interesting pattern and a lovely read!

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Valsa George 29 April 2014

...Such things are quite possible..... not only words but even their pronunciation can land us in difficulty... You have humorously narrated a simple anecdote of every day life... Interesting!

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Captain Herbert Poetry 28 April 2014

a poem about language barrier. Brilliant poem Please also comment on my poems

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