Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 685,091 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Enjoy First Creation - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Muse never refuses
But entertains and always pleases
For new comers or old as well
To speak for self and reveal

The simple form is available
With simple poet or as an individual
Where he does first attempt
With verses and that too prompt

It is like “person scaling highest peak”
For which he considered himself very weak
He has no reason now to disbelieve
But go on with dreams to relive

We need to pick threads from future
Morning cool breeze provides new hope for sure
It shows how quickly they may disappear
Yet they are here for you with no fear

Cuckoo airs melody for nothing in return
Yet she has joy in providing melody for human
Every one plays little of his part
Nature too is with you always from the start

Always enjoy first creation
That remains in memory as golden collection
“Try to forget it” and you won’t be able to
Some of the happy moments are always with you


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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/22/2014 10:43:00 PM)

    Mitos Jane Nepomuceno YÖHÒÓ
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    Mitos Jane Nepomuceno You are indeed an awesome, amazing poet, and a true friend.
    Stay blessed & be a blessing to many my dear HAZ :)))
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/22/2014 10:02:00 PM)

    Lisa Lombardi ur poems r light and hv a deep msg. like that
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/22/2014 10:02:00 PM)

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome memricel remirez
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/22/2014 9:18:00 PM)

    Muse never refuses
    But entertains and always pleases
    For new comers or old as well
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/22/2014 9:18:00 PM)

    :)

    Ruth Brebner37 minutes ago
    Enjoyed this poem, i particularly like the stanza about the Cuckoo - it was a nice, accessible concept for explaining the role of nature that you were trying to describe. The poem also has a very philosophical feel to it, like it was well thought out which was really cool. Well done!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/22/2014 9:18:00 PM)

    Creation

    Chastity King26 minutes ago
    Good
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  • Gajanan Mishra (1/22/2014 8:39:00 PM)

    every moment is happy moment, it depends on our thinking. good writing sir. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 22, 2014



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