So much screaming and never ending blood
Sitting and watching as the line for the torture
Its finally your turn and they string you up onto a barbed wire fence with wire around my ankles, wrists, and throat
They stick giant spikes through your stomach and into your spine
The pain
The agony
The pleasure
Your blood turns to acid and it burns you inside and out
Your eyes and skin are melting
Your screams echo the abyss
These screams are your warning
Stay out of my bloody abyss
Or suffer there fate
Now come enter my abyss
I dare you
well written it makes you feel as if you are really there and it reminds me of the way i feel alot of the time
Great poem. It does sounds like scenes from a movie! Congrats!
just words and it was like something out of an horror movie
Great poem and great vocabulary and I just felt the strenght of 'I dare you' :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i love this poem, great images come to mind as u read this poem. awsome, my kind of poem