Fall-winter girl,
Sparkling, wise
Words trail off
Fashions capsize
Kinesthetic, her eyes
Evoke snowflake moments
Of past mall-winter skies.
Dear Mandira Time and timelessness so seamlessly fused together... you give meaning to my pasts and presents... And my words do really always trail off :) ... as now... Thank you
Well Done Mandira, Feel Sensation of movement in meaning.Strains-With your pen or thoughts..? While reading your poem word of sun crosses the plane of the readers(earth's) equator.Do you feel reality of day and shadow of night are of equal length while writing 'Equinox girl'-Yes! Something like Maya and Mitra -Syed Ali Sagar
I admire the way you have chosen your words.. but, 'Kinesthetic' is new to me though.... The flow is smooth and the title apt. I am in an awe of your style!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
P.S. Flattered, but can't agree with the 'wise' bit...