Shut your eyes.
Whoever failed to make you see
You are the handsomest man on earth
Mirrors, friends, magazines
Were lying handsomely.
Unfurl your I, my love
Words crouch where truth lies-
Borrow my eyes.
Mandira, great ending... the perfect way to sum up a brilliant poem. Well done! ! Brian
'borrow my eyes'..the title could not have been better. I loved it sooooo much..this one goes in my favs. right away! the ending of this poem was splendid... great work! Preets and a 10!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow...and how! What wonderful not to be forgotten imagery...borrow my eyes...unfurl your I...words crouch where truth lies! Striking... original..insightful...I keep seeing them after I close my eyes...they are walking around in my brain... moving in. How wonderful you are...I've just giving you tens and adding you to my favourite poems. Unveil more of your mind...delight me. love Donall