Borrow My Eyes Poem by Mandira Mitra

Borrow My Eyes

Rating: 5.0


Shut your eyes.
Whoever failed to make you see
You are the handsomest man on earth
Mirrors, friends, magazines
Were lying handsomely.
Unfurl your I, my love
Words crouch where truth lies-
Borrow my eyes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Donall Dempsey 08 May 2007

Wow...and how! What wonderful not to be forgotten imagery...borrow my eyes...unfurl your I...words crouch where truth lies! Striking... original..insightful...I keep seeing them after I close my eyes...they are walking around in my brain... moving in. How wonderful you are...I've just giving you tens and adding you to my favourite poems. Unveil more of your mind...delight me. love Donall

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Brian Dorn 12 August 2006

Mandira, great ending... the perfect way to sum up a brilliant poem. Well done! ! Brian

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Preeti - is here! 11 August 2006

'borrow my eyes'..the title could not have been better. I loved it sooooo much..this one goes in my favs. right away! the ending of this poem was splendid... great work! Preets and a 10!

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