[eskimo Kisses] Poem by Frozen Beauty

[eskimo Kisses]

Rating: 4.6


rush to me
in sweet embrace
rewrite passion
across my face
hold my hand
to your heart
as you lead us
through the dark
sink in silence
pull me close
alluding words
we never spoke
lips and nose
brush lightly
breathing in
out with me

(02/28/09)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I love the heart used in this poem.. Very deep.. Nice work Krista

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~ Jon London ~ 01 March 2009

The soft voice of your heart sways lovingly down the page, this piece is well delivered. Cuddles the reader, to the end 10

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Izik Alcox 28 February 2009

an interesting write, I liked it, I had to re read it to capture its full beauty.

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