Time,
Like a rhyme
May be found pleasing,
But, the wonder of what comes next,
What it means,
And when it will end
May go on and on,
Forever teasing.
A facinating subject and thoughts well expressed.Life is for living.10.
I really like this, it's succinct and has a pleasing little rhythm within.
Fascinating. I like it. It's alluding to forever, isn't it? Which is and almost isn't an unknown, defined it seems and yet absolutely unknown as yet.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A charming piece, your opening reminds me of what Samuel Clemens said about time, the forever will exsist without us I guess that is the tease