Esoterica Poem by Smoky Hoss

Esoterica

Rating: 5.0


Time,
Like a rhyme
May be found pleasing,
But, the wonder of what comes next,
What it means,
And when it will end
May go on and on,
Forever teasing.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 11 May 2012

A charming piece, your opening reminds me of what Samuel Clemens said about time, the forever will exsist without us I guess that is the tease

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Matt Mooney 01 August 2011

A facinating subject and thoughts well expressed.Life is for living.10.

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Patti Masterman 19 February 2011

I really like this, it's succinct and has a pleasing little rhythm within.

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Jenny Gordon 14 January 2011

Fascinating. I like it. It's alluding to forever, isn't it? Which is and almost isn't an unknown, defined it seems and yet absolutely unknown as yet.

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