Eternal Peace Poem by Bonnie Collins

Eternal Peace

Rating: 5.0


Somewhere between Heaven and Hell
the tides rode ashore and called my name

Answering, with only gigantic waves rushing
agaist the rocks thrashing with torrid winds
of rage, I stood there helplessly

Pleading with all my might for you to take
me from this island of hell, take me to
to where torture, tears and fright no longer
have an existance

Blowing away fading as far as I could see,
the calmness rushed in, along with the blackend
sea turning to a hue of eternal blue skies
with a soft effervesant of an enternal peace.........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Hitesh Sheth 11 April 2009

Perhaps you experienced as Christ said the peace that surpasseth the understanding......Good Write...10+++........

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Andrew Blakemore 06 June 2008

Really beautiful Bonnie, just like a palette of colour washed upon the shore. Excellent. Andrew x

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Bonnie Collins

Bonnie Collins

Middletown New York
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