Eternal Warmth Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Eternal Warmth

Rating: 4.8


I needn't a Sun at dawn,
To warm my passions.
Or Sunlit, I wished so!
May our love be warmed!
Like the scorching sun.
When she lies on my bosom,
Under the moist moonlight,
Of this noon of night.
Here in this bank of a lake.
Where soft breeze caressing,
The soul of that lake,
As she is his lover!
Where stars float in glee,
Over the crystal surface,
Of its pacified waves,
Like thousands of water-fowls,
With a wink in their eyes.
And that surge of waves,
Slowly and rhythmically,
Kissing the brink of our heels,
To calm down the heat of our blood,
That surging through our hearts.
But our hearts beating in full swing
In the furnace of our love.
Where we'll not feel any heat of this world,
As we are in the eternal warmth of love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Arathy Sj 01 November 2011

I love this one better than ecstasy..beautiful..

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Eric Mwenda 29 October 2011

Your choice of words puts the reader in a position where they feel themselves candlin on the beach under the sky. U portray it perfectly...congrats.

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Preston Simmons 29 October 2011

I really like the message of your poem. Everyone wants to be loved and this poem exceptionally describes those feelings. Thanks for posting!

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Rania Hammoud 28 October 2011

lovely, spontaneus, and expressive...I love it

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Rania Hammoud 28 October 2011

How lovely, spontaneous and expressive..like like like

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Mark Anthony St. Rose 24 February 2012

great piece. I like it!

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Sahara Adhikari 09 December 2011

it's so gudd... i really loved ur poems like like

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Sahara Adhikari 09 December 2011

it's so gudd... i really loved ur poems

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Tanja Bulovic 04 November 2011

Beautiful imagery. Well done.

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Mercy Vin 03 November 2011

beautiful....the picture gets crystal clear in the readers' minds....gud job....

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