VIPINS PUTHOORAN


Eternal Warmth - Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

I needn't a Sun at dawn,
To warm my passions.
Or Sunlit, I wished so!
May our love be warmed!
Like the scorching sun.
When she lies on my bosom,
Under the moist moonlight,
Of this noon of night.
Here in this bank of a lake.
Where soft breeze caressing,
The soul of that lake,
As she is his lover!
Where stars float in glee,
Over the crystal surface,
Of its pacified waves,
Like thousands of water-fowls,
With a wink in their eyes.
And that surge of waves,
Slowly and rhythmically,
Kissing the brink of our heels,
To calm down the heat of our blood,
That surging through our hearts.
But our hearts beating in full swing
In the furnace of our love.
Where we'll not feel any heat of this world,
As we are in the eternal warmth of love.


Comments about Eternal Warmth by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

  • (2/24/2012 1:13:00 PM)

    great piece. I like it! (Report)Reply

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  • (12/9/2011 10:41:00 PM)

    it's so gudd... i really loved ur poems
    like like
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  • (12/9/2011 10:40:00 PM)

    it's so gudd... i really loved ur poems (Report)Reply

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  • (11/4/2011 6:39:00 PM)

    Beautiful imagery. Well done. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/3/2011 1:13:00 PM)

    beautiful....the picture gets crystal clear in the readers' minds....gud job.... (Report)Reply

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  • (11/1/2011 2:20:00 AM)

    I love this one better than ecstasy..beautiful.. (Report)Reply

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  • Eric Mwenda (10/29/2011 5:09:00 AM)

    Your choice of words puts the reader in a position where they feel themselves candlin on the beach under the sky. U portray it perfectly...congrats. (Report)Reply

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  • Preston Simmons (10/29/2011 2:15:00 AM)

    I really like the message of your poem. Everyone wants to be loved and this poem exceptionally describes those feelings. Thanks for posting! (Report)Reply

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  • (10/28/2011 2:50:00 PM)

    lovely, spontaneus, and expressive...I love it (Report)Reply

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  • (10/28/2011 2:46:00 PM)

    How lovely, spontaneous and expressive..like like like (Report)Reply

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  • (10/28/2011 2:40:00 PM)

    This poem is brilliant, your use of words is amazing! (Report)Reply

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  • (10/28/2011 11:40:00 AM)

    eloquent and melifluous, the words flow naturally and beautifully.
    exceptional
    10+
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  • Theany Ouy (10/27/2011 10:11:00 AM)

    The warmth of this poem just melt me away as I feel your emotions, line by line.So profound. Beautiful.. Thank you for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/27/2011 3:19:00 AM)

    You captured me; I couldn't even blink till I read through. This is a master piece. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/27/2011 3:07:00 AM)

    your poem is fabulous and i liked all the lines. when i was reading your lines, i could able to view the scenes of your lines in my mind, the best quality of a poet. Especially the way you describe is simply awesome and that's the poetic touch by a master poet. Simply the best. Thanks for inviting me to read your piece. (Report)Reply

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  • Alex Sarich (10/26/2011 1:32:00 PM)

    superb use of words, so direct to the soul, heavenly touching. thanks for your comments. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/26/2011 11:46:00 AM)

    Holy moly, Holy dooly! What pleasant poem it is! The pleasure is my to read such lines like these..............
    'I needn't a Sun at dawn,
    To warm my passions.
    Or Sunlit, I wished so!
    May our love be warmed!
    Like the scorching sun.'
    You can hit the bull's eye with poems like these. I appreciate your energy to write love poems. You have good hand in writing love poems my fellow poet, This poem is simply superb.........A pat and a hat to the poet. Click! Click! Ha! ha! Ha!
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  • Yoseph Lupu (10/26/2011 11:17:00 AM)

    hI! YOU HAVE DECORATED YOUR POEM WITH NATURE!
    very nice!
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  • (10/26/2011 10:51:00 AM)

    Wow, I'm glad I came. Great poem (Report)Reply

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  • Anncelin Dev (10/26/2011 3:18:00 AM)

    splendid! ! ! ur poem is really beautiful :) (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 23, 2011



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