Eternal Warmth Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Eternal Warmth

Rating: 4.8


I needn't a Sun at dawn,
To warm my passions.
Or Sunlit, I wished so!
May our love be warmed!
Like the scorching sun.
When she lies on my bosom,
Under the moist moonlight,
Of this noon of night.
Here in this bank of a lake.
Where soft breeze caressing,
The soul of that lake,
As she is his lover!
Where stars float in glee,
Over the crystal surface,
Of its pacified waves,
Like thousands of water-fowls,
With a wink in their eyes.
And that surge of waves,
Slowly and rhythmically,
Kissing the brink of our heels,
To calm down the heat of our blood,
That surging through our hearts.
But our hearts beating in full swing
In the furnace of our love.
Where we'll not feel any heat of this world,
As we are in the eternal warmth of love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
G Shyam Sundar 27 October 2011

your poem is fabulous and i liked all the lines. when i was reading your lines, i could able to view the scenes of your lines in my mind, the best quality of a poet. Especially the way you describe is simply awesome and that's the poetic touch by a master poet. Simply the best. Thanks for inviting me to read your piece.

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Olayinka Faderera Olayiwola 27 October 2011

You captured me; I couldn't even blink till I read through. This is a master piece.

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Theany Ouy 27 October 2011

The warmth of this poem just melt me away as I feel your emotions, line by line.So profound. Beautiful.. Thank you for sharing.

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lost soul 28 October 2011

eloquent and melifluous, the words flow naturally and beautifully. exceptional 10+

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Crimson Love 28 October 2011

This poem is brilliant, your use of words is amazing!

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Mark Anthony St. Rose 24 February 2012

great piece. I like it!

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Sahara Adhikari 09 December 2011

it's so gudd... i really loved ur poems like like

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Sahara Adhikari 09 December 2011

it's so gudd... i really loved ur poems

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Tanja Bulovic 04 November 2011

Beautiful imagery. Well done.

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Mercy Vin 03 November 2011

beautiful....the picture gets crystal clear in the readers' minds....gud job....

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