Not with much thought, brought about by the mind
Do we sweet freedom ultimately find.
Only with heart can minds' link be broken,
And a start made on doors which can open
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Beautiful write Fay loved the content of the poem truly heartfelt 10 +++ Chris
The usual top quality is diminished by a turbulence in flow, sorry to point out. As a person I know well is similar in expressing herself at times, this bothers me little. But I would look and perhaps there is a willingness to change 4 things. Even without it it remains a good poem. Little Me Hxxx
A lot of images and thoughts here Fay...thank you...lovely write as always...Fi...10++
A poem written..emotionally expressed....very well penned...10