Eternally Now. Poem by Fay Slimm

Eternally Now.

Rating: 5.0


Not with much thought, brought about by the mind
Do we sweet freedom ultimately find.
Only with heart can minds' link be broken,
And a start made on doors which can open
To golden new life, where ecstasy's felt
In the NOW, in the moment, which once dwelt
Within hearts by right, now lost to our sight,
And though neglected, mis-used and blighted
Is still part of our permanent beauty.
It's attained in piercing the soul at root
By Awareness, an ease with the self, starting
With goals which unroll the present stark
Moment....... Awareness, not future or past,
But of NOW, offers true freedom at last.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sue Sie 06 February 2009

A poem written..emotionally expressed....very well penned...10

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Kris Smith 06 February 2009

Beautiful write Fay loved the content of the poem truly heartfelt 10 +++ Chris

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Herbert Nehrlich1 06 February 2009

The usual top quality is diminished by a turbulence in flow, sorry to point out. As a person I know well is similar in expressing herself at times, this bothers me little. But I would look and perhaps there is a willingness to change 4 things. Even without it it remains a good poem. Little Me Hxxx

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Fiona Davidson 06 February 2009

A lot of images and thoughts here Fay...thank you...lovely write as always...Fi...10++

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Vaibhav Pandey 06 February 2009

great thought in this one...very beautiful.

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in Cornwall U.K.
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