Saturday, October 5, 2024

Evasion Comments

Rating: 5.0

We almost touch silence with bare hands
It hangs with tonal banalty over our reclining frames
Our love can hardly find a narrative structure
We have too many loose plots on the edges
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Nosheen Irfan
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Rob Lamberton 17 October 2024

Love is difficult to evade even if we can't explain it!

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Denis Mair 06 October 2024

I like the idea that treating love as an inscription leads to a debacle. It is not for the lover to inscribe such a big, imposing thing, perhaps because love is the inscription of all inscriptions.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 05 October 2024

Noshy Thank U for this Marvelous poem Bravo! ! ! !

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Anjandev Roy 05 October 2024

Such a wonderful piece! ..... thanks for sharing.......

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‘Our hands grope'.. not for the hand of the other, but..'..for reasons ".. excellent. Top score and added to Myfav

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They say, "Love has a million hues." Maybe, silence is just one of the many. Sure, Love may not be very vocal, but it is very communicative. It might be true that Silence communicates better than a zillion words..

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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