Even That... Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Even That...

Rating: 5.0

I don't hope to see you
For you are just a mirage
An illusion of a vacant heart
An apparition to an empty mind
With leafless courtyards.

I'd rather see the painted sky
The crimson splash of the sunset
Or the yellow burst of the sunrise
But even that... I want to see
Through your eyes.

Friday, September 29, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: sunset
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 29 September 2023

Images, beyond dreams so full of poetic feelings and love's dreams! Your great poetic artistry and sensitivity, just carries us away! With this unforgettable poem as beautiful as the dawning of a new day. Top marks and an ever present favorite.

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Sandra Feldman 29 September 2023

Two stanzas of such delicate, poetic beauty

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M. Asim Nehal 29 September 2023

A state of mind nicely put forth in this amusing poem. Full *****

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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