I Choose To Rise Poem by Nosheen Irfan

I Choose To Rise

Rating: 4.7


I choose to rise
Like a mountain in love with the sky
Always gazing up in wonder
At the azure splendor of the day
And scarlet beauty of eve
I long to be near the sky
To talk to the sailing clouds
That carry a rain of sorrow
Beneath a sombre demeanor
I long to stand upright
Though bent with baggage of time
Like a mountain I wear a stony face
With dreams buried in caves of silence

I Choose To Rise
Thursday, June 11, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,courage,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Picture credit to Nadeem Ishaque
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 11 June 2020

Beautiful! ! ! The closing 4 lines are majestic like mountains=====> I long to stand upright Though bent with baggage of time / Like a mountain I wear a stony face/ With dreams buried in caves of silence < === that is extraordinary writing, Nosheen 10+++++ and onto my fav list

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As soon as I say the title I came running as it reminded me of a poem that I wrote, I Choose the Mountain... I was not disappointing. In fact, it is simply sublime!

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Nosheen Irfan 19 June 2020

Thank you so much Howard. Your poem I Choose the mountain is a masterpiece. I'm nowhere near that level of perfection but your kind words make me feel elated and a little conceited. lol. Thanks my genius friend.

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Mahtab Bangalee 11 June 2020

I choose to rise......very beautiful and enjoyable poem shared thanks for sharing.....deserves great 10++ I choose to rise rise high high from the obnoxious mind high, wanna fly more high more than the mountain more, more wanna fly over the sky...........

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Congrats on reaching 300 poems. They are all very impressive!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 September 2022

Like a mountain in love with the sky... this is the speciality of the power of your imagination and creativity. It's a great pleasure to read your poetry!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 28 August 2022

Beautiful I wish I could write like that

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 September 2021

This is a majestic poem that desseminates vibes of optimism

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 August 2021

A very commendable piece of poetry! I admire your choice! !

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Deluke Muwanigwa 20 March 2021

Excellent poetic expression

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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