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The Storm

Rating: 5.0
Today the sky wept
With a passionate, fervent plea
Pouring out his pain in floods
Unrestrained, full-throttled gush
Torn from black clouds of silent grief
In a ceaseless stream of tears
Held back long inside the fears

The sky wept and wept long
Unburdening himself of heaps
Of untold miseries he collected
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Friday, February 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: agony,disaster,nature
COMMENTS
Bharati Nayak 16 March 2021
What a wonderful write--full of emotions and full of meanings.I agree with Susan Williams-You have a magic pen.Five stars and to my poem list.
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Unnikrishnan E S 13 January 2021
3) Above all, Nosheen, good to see you back on PoemHunter. Hope, you will be seen here more often. Thank you
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Unnikrishnan E S 13 January 2021
Part 2.. let me quote " the sky cried for her For her barren, shriveled soul. " Loved it. All the five stars.
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Unnikrishnan E S 13 January 2021
Wonderful write, Nosheen. You are at your best when your poet is prowess addresses the nature. You areas keen an observer of nature as skilled and talented you are as a poet. (continues)
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Susan Williams 13 January 2021
5 star rating and favoriting this
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Susan Williams 13 January 2021
A powerful poem---as powerful as the storm it depicts---you have a magic pen, my friend!
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M Asim Nehal 04 December 2020
Excellent The land found no answer She could but little divine The meaning of this violent rupture She imagined little That the sky cried for her For her barren, shriveled soul.
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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 March 2020
The sky wept and wept long/Unburdening himself of heaps/Of untold miseries he collected/In his bursting bosom over time! Captivating poetic expression! My great pleasure reading this magnificent poem time and again! I hope, this beautiful poem will be featured among top 500 member poems soon!
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Sarah Shahzad 14 January 2020
Read this amazing piece a lot of times. The content and the poem flows amazing :) keep writing
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A B Faniki 01 September 2019
Oh and thanks for sharing
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