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Eventually, Always Is

Rating: 5.0

It's not too 'poetic' but it's what I was thinking in my head and as much as some sanctimonious, impractical writers would pretend, I don't think in poems

Teeth pull the words back;
I've just bit my tongue!
That means I'm using a measure of tact.
A minute ago, I KNEW had you, stutter and sigh;
we were edging around fun.
And I was thinking, wow,
Won't you be mine?
And now,

your hand is warm, calloused fact.
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Harish K. Thakur 10 June 2008

nice poem miller, you can write better..

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Susan Jarvis 10 June 2008

'teeth pull the words back', 'warm, calloused fact' - what do you mean this is not too 'poetic'? ! With imagery and metaphors at play this is a wonderful poem. S :)

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Jessica Rose 10 June 2008

coolio. i like it (^^,) jeshka xx

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