Ever Feel? Poem by Israh Sadan

Ever Feel?

Rating: 4.0


Ever feel that you're good
As long as you give
As long you never need?

You always pour in so much
Of yourself till you have
Nothing left for yourself.

Yet still, in struggling
Not to fail, u feel
Like a falure for stuggling.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juliette Lamoureux 01 August 2008

Yes I do feel like that, but I am doing everything in my power to change it. Thankyou for sharing. J. Lamoureux

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Greenwolfe 1962 31 July 2008

The last verse was really special. It makes an interesting point about struggling. It is what a lot of people think without saying. Worth remembering. GW62

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