Every Millimetre Poem by chloe young

Every Millimetre

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If i could have your arms as a pillow, i would bring it everywhere, even on the bus. I would wrap it around me if i was cold. I would put half of it on my shoulders if i was at the cinema. I would put them behind me if i was looking at the sea, and make it squeeze around my
stomach until i felt you in my bellybutton.

I want to be a fish gliding through your veins, come out of your mouth and kiss every millimetre of your lips.

I would make your hair a hat and in the morning i would run it through my fingers, i would drag it up my stomach and around my chest and have it entwine with mine, resting near my nose and stay like that until your smell was gone.

I want to sit under a blossom tree with the sun coming through in little streams.
Only with you.

I want to sit infront of the painting 'scream' for five hundred hours, so when i look at you, you would be even more beautiful.

I want to watch every breathtaking sunrise come up from behind your face. See your eyes glisen, with morning moisture and yellow light.

I want you to always be happy. Your heart shimmers in your eyes. When it is not there,
neither am i.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Steven S 24 August 2009

This is how I want to be loved... of course.

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This I-lay-my-heart-bare genre of poetry is absolutely moving, the fish of your yearnings actually moved all over the confusion of blood your desire of running fingers actually tickled my thinning scalp. Beautiful my child very universally lucid depiction of some very deep seated emotions. r

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Ben Toh La Wok 12 June 2009

this isn't just a retaliatory comment in response to your nice words....i wouldn't comment you if i didn't like what i saw - this poem is honest and true, i have been in love and know this. there is some original language interspersed amongst the feeling...and it's good that you're not restricted by structure and format.well done.

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Shekhar Joshi 28 May 2009

a beautiful poem........ expresses how much love u have for him.. wonderfull

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