Every Moon Sets -02: Cry Of The Ashes Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Every Moon Sets -02: Cry Of The Ashes

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Your memories

Turned into heaps-

Heaps of sadness,

Surges of darkness.



The wild cry of griffin

Rushed around

The black cliff of

My heart's voyage

In sea, storm and ice.

Every Moon Sets -02: Cry Of The Ashes
Sunday, October 8, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: ash,heartache,memoir,road,sad love,sadness,separation,shattered
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lopamudra Kajolika 15 November 2017

Your memories Turned into heaps- Heaps of sadness, Surges of darkness. Sadness well expressed post separation. Love it.10++++for sharing it.

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Anita Aparajita Das 09 October 2017

Your memories Turned into heaps- Heaps of sadness, Surges of darkness. Great poem. Thanks. 10++

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Seema Sharma Rimi 09 October 2017

Rushed around The black cliff of My heart's voyage In sea, storm and ice. Lovely lines. The sign of your great poetic skill. Thanks. 10++ for it.

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Sabita Sahoo 09 October 2017

Your memories Turned into heaps- Heaps of sadness, Surges of darkness. Sadness well expressed post separation. 10++

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Anita Aparajita Das 08 October 2017

The wild cry of griffin Rushed around The black cliff of My heart's voyage In sea, storm and ice. Yes the black cliff of sea, storm and ice...nice imagery. Nicely penned.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 09 October 2017

Thank you dear for your lovely remarks.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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