Every Moon Sets -03: The Dark Smile Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Every Moon Sets -03: The Dark Smile

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Your smile in the dark

Sad, evil, yet nostalgic

Hypnotized the buds-

Buds of silent laughter,

Petals of pink dreams,

Twigs of fiery urges.




The tiny kid in dreams

Within me, turned pale

Pale with fear and shock

Still half awake, half asleep

On the bed of youth,

On the shore of good times

And the moonlit sky.

Every Moon Sets -03: The Dark Smile
Sunday, October 8, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: dark side,darkness,evil,longing,nostalgia,road,sad love,sadness,separation,shattered
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lopamudra Kajolika 15 November 2017

The tiny kid in dreams Within me, turned pale Pale with fear and shock Still half awake, half asleep On the bed of youth, Thanks for sharing it. Beautiful poem,

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Seema Sharma Rimi 09 October 2017

The tiny kid in dreams Within me, turned pale Pale with fear and shock Still half awake, half asleep On the bed of youth, Lines, rare and beautiful. Thanks. 10+++ for the poem shared.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 October 2017

Thank you my dear Rini for the loving remarks.

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Sabita Sahoo 09 October 2017

Your smile in the dark Sad, evil, yet nostalgic Hypnotized the buds- Beautiful poem shared. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 October 2017

Thank you dear Sabita for the loving remarks.

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Anita Aparajita Das 08 October 2017

The tiny kid in dreams Within me, turned pale Pale with fear and shock Still half awake, half asleep On the bed of youth, Beautiful poem, thanks.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 09 October 2017

Thank you Neetu dear for the lovely remarks.

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Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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