Every Seven Seconds Poem by David Darbyshire

Every Seven Seconds

Rating: 5.0


To my partner in love
I say ' I Love You'
Every seven seconds of the day
Because that’s the length
Of her memory display

Still she reminds me
Every second of the day
Did you say you love me?
If not I have to say it
Right away

This does not bother me
In any form or way
Actually I love her
Every second
Of the day

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
kAy BaRCeLon 05 March 2007

Wow! ! ! The Darbyshire has fallen... But just wondering... Do you think 7 seconds is enough chance for her to say - 'I Love You Too'? ? ? You talk about anything else? LOL Still a Great poem... and a Great idea! ! ! Thanks,

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Lynda Robson 22 February 2007

Us women need reminding we are loved, very observant write Dave, love Lynda xx

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Heather Mueller 22 February 2007

I really like this poem and it really reminds me of my own relationship. good job and keep writing and i'll keep reading-Heather

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